Absurd Mind Comments

an excellent poem...right from the heart! ! !

wonderful, wonderful, i love this from the both hand!

coooooooooool so awesome!

rhyming is something I don't know of, so i envy you use them nicely. I think you are a wonderful poem writer.

if i get everything i want, life will be hell No one should lit the light for me from the dark i have a lot to gain i really like these lines, having a thoughtful lesson for all of us, simple & delicate but influenced a lot

d use of railway station and last train seemed grt. kudos to u

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