It seemed like a sin is watching,
from the camouflaged trenches.
As she hid her scars with vermillion
And draped her past in a raiment of promise
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Brilliant eloquent capturing of d scene in poem. So realistic!
not easy to touch the raised platform where you have already made your place by fertile imagination, such is the level of abstraction of your composition! thanks
A fantastic poem Aman....................