Thursday, July 11, 2013

Abstractions Of A Temple Comments

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It seemed like a sin is watching,
from the camouflaged trenches.
As she hid her scars with vermillion
And draped her past in a raiment of promise
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Aman Saa
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Neela Nath Das 14 June 2014

A fantastic poem Aman....................

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 13 December 2013

Brilliant eloquent capturing of d scene in poem. So realistic!

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Rasheed Hasan 23 November 2013

nice one K'nitin. Abstract imagination

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R.j. Wynn 10 August 2013

Enjoyed the poem friend

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Shahzia Batool 11 July 2013

not easy to touch the raised platform where you have already made your place by fertile imagination, such is the level of abstraction of your composition! thanks

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