The impalpable passing of time
The intangible sailing of life
Make you realize you live
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The intrigues of life and the enigma that is time are very interestingly captured in the poem. As the ultimate Indian philosophy states, "what you see is not what exists. And what really exists, you would not see at all"… good poem, Nosheen
Beautiful work! A wonderful contemplation of existence. Top marks!
Wonderful and perceptive thoughts to ponder about. A poem of great insight! The last three lines are so true.. Top Marks as always.
Philosophy expressed in brilliant creative form. Love the poem, Nosheen!