Thursday, June 12, 2008

Abstract This Life Comments

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Betwixt these lines, I sense foreboding
Of unspoken words I am supposing
Where things now done, may bring you dismay
What change would you have made I say?
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sue crocker
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Stone Granite 13 June 2008

Sue - this is a wonderful expression of looking toward the future, as looking back to change things is simply fruitless. An amazing friend of mine recently wrote to me, 'If you hanker on the past it only makes you bitter.' Amazing indeed. Words I too could use to live by. I loved your poem, Sue and may the future provide you the comfort the past has not. Stone

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