Too abstract is LOVE!
Yet it lives-
In slow songs.
Ripples down;
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Wow! This is a perfect love-song! Is it abstract? Or says clearly - " I see it in You" . Congratulations on this poem being chosen! Well-deserved!
Every stride! ! Every step! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Well expressed thoughts and feelings. An insightful creation. Thanks for sharing, Tribhuvan.
A sweet poem. Short and to the point about love. 'Leftovers of chocolate malt. I see it in you. And it smiles back, Flushed, un-scalded, And perfect.'... is so nice. Loved it. Congrats.
Thanks for understanding heart and love that resides in it
On crushed leaves; Of the grass Can be found in Leftovers of chocolate malt... i see it in you. love, love, fineness of love. tony
A cute romantic poem..short but with profound depth! Many congratulations for this lovely poem being chosen as Poem of the Day!
Love is indescribable, so beautiful that you see it everywhere. A fascinating poem
Beautiful poem Tribhuvan..congratulations! I like the way that it moves from the contemplation of Love as an abstract subject to it being located in nature and the particulars of everyday life...a pleasure to read!
Lucky those who love and have loved. Most precious gift as this poem beautifully makes us feel and our spirits, lifts. Thank you.
Such a sweet lovely poem of the day. Congrats, sir Tribhuvan on your featured piece...10+++
Love complements a life of togetherness through mutual respect and selfless sacrifice. Thanks.
" Too abstract and perfect" . Congratulations