Sunday, August 11, 2019

Abstract Love Comments

Rating: 4.8

Too abstract is LOVE!
Yet it lives-
In slow songs.
Ripples down;
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Tribhuvan Mendiratta
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" Too abstract and perfect" . Congratulations

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Banamala Sen 17 September 2019

Beautiful! Short, but full of love! Congratulations!

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Malabika Ray Choudhury 17 September 2019

Wow! This is a perfect love-song! Is it abstract? Or says clearly - " I see it in You" . Congratulations on this poem being chosen! Well-deserved!

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 September 2019

Every stride! ! Every step! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Chinedu Dike 17 September 2019

Well expressed thoughts and feelings. An insightful creation. Thanks for sharing, Tribhuvan.

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Anil Kumar Panda 17 September 2019

A sweet poem. Short and to the point about love. 'Leftovers of chocolate malt. I see it in you. And it smiles back, Flushed, un-scalded, And perfect.'... is so nice. Loved it. Congrats.

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Tribhuvan Mendiratta 17 September 2019

Thanks for understanding heart and love that resides in it

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Dr Antony Theodore 17 September 2019

On crushed leaves; Of the grass Can be found in Leftovers of chocolate malt... i see it in you. love, love, fineness of love. tony

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Tribhuvan Mendiratta 17 September 2019

Thanks for reaching out to my heart

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 September 2019

A cute romantic poem..short but with profound depth! Many congratulations for this lovely poem being chosen as Poem of the Day!

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Mahtab Bangalee 17 September 2019

Too abstract is LOVE! beautifully written on LOVE

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Uche Nwanze 17 September 2019

Love is indescribable, so beautiful that you see it everywhere. A fascinating poem

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Dominic Windram 17 September 2019

Beautiful poem Tribhuvan..congratulations! I like the way that it moves from the contemplation of Love as an abstract subject to it being located in nature and the particulars of everyday life...a pleasure to read!

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Sandra Feldman 17 September 2019

Lucky those who love and have loved. Most precious gift as this poem beautifully makes us feel and our spirits, lifts. Thank you.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 17 September 2019

Such a sweet lovely poem of the day. Congrats, sir Tribhuvan on your featured piece...10+++

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Rajnish Manga 11 August 2019

Thanks also for a symbolic graphic.

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Rajnish Manga 11 August 2019

Love complements a life of togetherness through mutual respect and selfless sacrifice. Thanks.

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