Monday, August 30, 2010

Abstract Comments

Rating: 4.6

Eyes look through the mirror…
Conscious is the brain.
No more illusions…
The reality of life wins out…
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Kevin Carney
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Bernard Snyder 25 November 2015

Powerful poem sir. Very deep, yet easy to comprehend. Great job!

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Ratnakar Mandlik 25 November 2015

A beautiful meaningful poem with nice imagery. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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M Asim Nehal 25 November 2015

It’s something you thought you might have lost. Look into the mirror. Look at yourself. Study the emotional expression. You once knew… So far away and lost. Gain and insight… Tell me what you see.

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Shah Surja 25 November 2015

Tell me what you see.......

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Paul Brookes 25 November 2015

A very vivid poem full of colour and spice

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Bert Bell 20 October 2010

Very beautiful poetic thoughts, Kevin, ending up with two killer last lines. A lot of power in these well-chosen words. Well done.

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ITs a good poem i like it i say it would give alot of heart

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Poetic Soul 30 August 2010

A well penned write and vividly expressed...well done.

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