On a foggy winter day
I wandered long
riding my bicycle
down the countryside.
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A fabulous poem replete with imagery! Beautifully composed! Appreciated and admired the adorable poetic expression...10
Great imagination and remembrance wonderfully perceived in the poem, greatly written, thanks
something so strong yet so subtle as a feeling.. loved that Fog the image I got in your lines! Thank you for sharing Sir! 10+++!
What a beautiful poetic write. Solitude is a poet's best friend. Imagination works really well away from the world's hassles.
Very good imagination and narration.. Keep writing more poems.
Nice poem about life in a simple form. Thank you Mr. Akham for sharing.
Yet never seen; like an artist with his or her brush in the hand. Thanks for sharing.
A wonderful imaginative write with compelling imagery. Beautifully crafted.