Tuesday, December 12, 2017

Abstract Comments

Rating: 4.8

I fell asleep in my jeans
I woke and I leaned
Upon the dream
Of normalcy
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Irma Goo
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George Krokos 12 December 2017

A good overall read though with a couple of issues of grammar that may need to be fixed.

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Dr Antony Theodore 12 December 2017

slouching to infinity Searching, striving for divinity This inner peace must give to me An outer piece of of joy yes abstract sometimes and realistic at other verse........thank yu for your random thoughts.. tony

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