Saturday, August 24, 2013

Absolution Comments

Rating: 4.9

Shadows in the dark
Pressing down on me
Extinguishing the spark
Of my humanity
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Gypsy Boy Ravey
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Valerie Dohren 24 August 2013

Brilliant - especially like the first stanza. I think we all feel like this at some point in our life, very well penned.

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