Thursday, February 6, 2014

Absolution Comments

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These paths that originate
In the land of temptation,
Branch out and mingle with streets of sin,
I have traveled all of them,
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Lucifera Santez
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Sharon Peeples 08 February 2014

Your poem is very well written. The intensity of emotion and evil are palpable. For a dark write, this is quite good.

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