Absolute Nothingness Comments
Staring on my easel
I gently stroked on the canvas
from my very soul
the color of hope
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A soothing poem with free flow of ideas. You nailed it with this masterpiece.10++
..You claim that you love me more than my sins much more than my kins with all emptiness and thirst I look up to You waiting for Your final stroke and ultimately I will be blessed.. God loves us more than our sins.......... that is our hope and saves us from falling into absolute nothingness feelings............ thank you dear poetess.. this is great poem. tony
amazing..! i love how you described the despair n then the way our faith saves us from falling into total abyss
The color of my faith, was there with all its radiance spreading smoothingly vital on the canvas Compassionately i looked at my incomplete painting Now i wait for Your final stroke of love! I love your claim of loving me more than my sins. Beautiful and lovely expressions. Philiosophy, faith, hope, love all are there expressed in your lovely poem. Thank you dear poetess
Very Nicely written Poet.. with such deep meanings yet so delicate expressions. Loved all the Stanzas! ! thank you for sharing! ! Siddartha Me!
Love the honesty and originality of this inspirational write, so deep and real with the hope and faith of our Creator to finish with the final stroke!
Thank you :) Glad that you liked my poems. I would suggest you to read my poem dreaming too
Beautiful rendition of words to utmost justice. Lovely poem, well articulated and nicely penned in good poetic diction with spiritual insight. The Lord Almighty Maketh a way where there is no way. Thanks for sharing and do remain blessed.
oh! i was running short of it! despite of my wit, I am so short of it! Beautiful lines with pretty rhymes, this poem is a master piece of divine love, and if it is the first poem of the poetess, it is a magic heading towards a miracle.
oh! i was running short of it! despite of my wit, I am so short of it! Beautiful lines with pretty rhymes, this poem is a master piece of divine love, and if it is the first poem of the poetess, it is a magic heading towards a miracle.
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7/18/2025 3:31:41 PM # 1.0.0
I like your ideas in this poem, your passionate expression, but you need to add details, and detailed descriptions of sight, sound, touch, smell so that readers better understand your emotions. Dennis