Thursday, July 3, 2008

Absolute Love [acrostic] Comments

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Almost never found,
But gorgeous at first sight,
Seen from a point of view almost no one has,
Obscure to the common sight,
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Javier Falcon
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Cassandra Jasmine 20 August 2013

Beautiful poem Ever so heart-warming Also heart-warming Umbrella (For the un-returned love ;)) Truly beautifully written Infinity lives Far away, love can travel Unfortunately, not always true, Lovely, of course!

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Ershad Mazumder 17 October 2008

Live in your soul Do not live in your body Body is full of greed desires and lust Destined to be dust. Live in your soul To feel what you are And to feel what is your destination.

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I love this! ! you are good and you are so young. that's good..

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Heidi Wiggin 15 July 2008

The best description of it ive ever read awesome

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you didnt tell me you put 2 more new poems up! ! ughh eternal is SUCH a strong word. you used it very well. great job. x3, mill

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