Wednesday, May 14, 2008

Absent Presence Comments

Rating: 4.0

You've dangled one-too-many carrots, yet offered none for a taste.

You've shown many-a-glimpses, yet never revealed the whole.
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Suraj Samtani
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Anjali Sinha 30 June 2008

Hey, This is a beautiful poem-- i like the sequences that follow one after another. Great writing Suraj --keep it up! ! ! ! ! . Start smiling. regards,

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Hayley Johnson 14 May 2008

i love this , most of all the form nice word choice

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