Absences Comments

These absences touch so secretly our presence.10.

I understand so much Rani. What a beautiful poem. Life has a way of stripping us of the things we find comfort in sometimes, doesn't it. Nobody goes through it unscathed. Big Hug for this one Ruthy

A nice poem on absences, well composed with nice imagery. My 10 added to it.

pain, agony, loneliness-we have to bear alone. it is at such times when the void becomes unbearable, we discover, we were chasing what was never there. then transformation occurs, and you connect to yourself and his all prevading Presence. a lovely, sad but honest poem 10+

excellent write, so much to ponder upon

very sad, but also beautiful...as if like took away a good deal of what you should still have but in nature u can find solace...really enjoyed alot 10/10

There is a river that flows through the land Its banks are full of plants and sand ---------------- From confusion and torture come the light

heart still craves for the dusts of own, as when splashes the mind by rippling river and yet mellowed green as when bessorted grin memoirs still nostalgic by the memory haunting the pages of memorabilia.....of halcyon days, wonderful imagery by the life in a limited world, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing wishing its gleams of nature memors still bestirs

Yeah that is where we long to be where we enjoy our loneliness. A nice write...............I enjoyed it.

I like the images your use to convey emotion in this poem. I also noticed how the reader is subtly guided into a place of hope at the end. Very nicely executed. Much enjoyed. Shirley

I enjoyed this one, especially the last few lines, Thankyou for sharing your art Rani Love duncan X

These absences cause The evolution of new things In its natural ways. An artist can trap These absences into his trance In one such trance created is this poem. I liked the stance of absence in this poem. I don't want to call it sadness I call it a cause of great creativity. Very good theme and style of write. Thank you.

i like here the abrupt change in the last stanza of the poem, , , absences are most beautifully filled with such imagination..

This is just beautiful - a 'big' poem. Full of substance and covering so much ground. Lovely, Rani. Fx

Rani, this is just wonderful! Your sellection of words is wonderful - it definitely goes to my favourites. I cannot quote one particular passage which i like more - it is perfect in its mass.

This one is going straight to my favourites. It's a wonderful wistful write and the poignancy abounds from your pen. I can just see you sitting by the River Seine penning this ode to absence of a cherished one. HG: -) xx

I feel I don't know as much as I should about the writer of this piece. But I found the writing to be excellant. The sentiment is more universal than perhaps the writer implies but that is very good for such a poem because even though I don't know the writer I know of what she speaks. GW62

Rani, World is indifferent to your pains, it is true, a poem with substance, it flows melodiously....... a very good write....

great that the river still flows green and blue in your mind. no absense, i feel your heart's presense very much in those lines there...good emotional write, rani

beautifully compsoed natural imagery.good poem