Tuesday, July 28, 2015

Absence Versus Presence Comments

Rating: 5.0

When beauty is in the arms,
I inhale all its charms,
Outside me it’s nothing that remains,
It’s me, the beauty who sustains,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Bisma Mirza 30 July 2015

Great Poem.......its Aw sum really...10 on 10! !

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Valsa George 29 July 2015

Love smiles like a virgin bride, And me a full moon tide! Lovely lines...... and a lovely write! Hurray.... Poet of love!

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Khalida Bano Ali 28 July 2015

An impressive poem......................10

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Savita Tyagi 28 July 2015

Lovely poem. Loved the last few lines. Full of charm and beauty.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 July 2015

When the beauty reunites, A fire she ignites, Love smiles like a virgin bride, And me a full moon tide! wonderful imagery. A captivating poem I like most. Thanks for sharing. ...10

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