Absence Of The Sun Comments

This is a great poem with a profound metaphor of the Sun in reference to the Son.

A good imagination about the absence of sun light which is the real source of energy of world.

The force of darkness in the absence of Sun light surely haunts as in a Dracula story!

James this one gave me chills... I'm awestruck by the beauty and especially the simplicity of your words. a definite 10

Beauty and clarity wrapped up together. That's hard to come by.

time within a hearts sighs love like a flame that takes you high love that can never be tamed sighs in which wonder came in which you say cant be chained thats a love that will make you sang a poem to my heart please write more

Your word powers are superb in this one Jim. Have to confess I had to look up the word! Id'. Let's get into the sunlight quickly.! ! ! ! ! Very ludidly written. Greetings from Fay. P.S. I shuddered as I gave it the ten it deserves.