Sunday, August 30, 2009

Absence Of Malice Comments

Rating: 5.0

Wandering around
Trapped between Time and Space
Alone and tired with a weary face
In pursuit of a real love, not yet found...
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Romeo Della Valle
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A purely poetic vision of a noble, humble and malice free man, looking for the true love... I'm sure he's got the chances to find and keep it for the rest of his life, but only then when he shows his true colours (the bright and dark ones) without any fear of rejection...True love by definition understands everything...

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Aira Olayvar 28 December 2009

Ahhhhhhh... true as it is… many of us has experienced this, as for me, I have learned not to look for that, I will just wait. If the person will then come and never leave and if love will truly succeed, may be then I am lucky, for if not, then for me, it is not meant to be. : (huhuhu

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Allemagne Roßmann 05 September 2009

experience moments of joy and pain But everything seems still the same Finding some things pleasant or corny... very very realistic and poetically poised verses.I like it.10++from me as usual.

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Marieta Maglas 31 August 2009

lovely stanza: : ''Miles I traveled, many times I stumbled Trying to reach my ultimate goal, Caught between a wall and a bouncing ball- Nevertheless, I stayed humble And I did not lose of myself control...'' wonderful rational poem........................10

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Romeo Della Valle

Romeo Della Valle

Dominican Republic
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