Absence Of Color When We Dream Comments
I sit in the dark with the pc screen on writing to girls i can't meet
We depart yet i'm hoping that something remains the absence of color incomplete
The absence of color when we dream
The absence of hope when we fail to seem
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I love this title, The Absence of Color When We Dream', but don't think the work lives up to the title. I'd love to see you make a simple image poem of this, nothing didactic or overly-wordy.
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7/19/2025 4:19:03 AM # 1.0.0
i love this poem, you are an amazing poet.