Saturday, January 24, 2009

Absence Makes The Heart Grow Fonder Comments

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Oh beautiful one how are you
Read my poem and tell me if it’s true
At the end of the long tunnel your my light
When it’s cold your my blanket for the night
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Yassar Ali
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Allemagne Roßmann 14 February 2010

Your my hot water bottle when am not well Your my secret diary to whom my secrets I would tell Your my medicine to take away all the pain Your the only one whom I would dance with in the rain Your my map to help me find the way Your my energy to get me through the day Your my drug to get me high Your the one to whom I can’t lie Your my only true addiction 10 from me.................................................Love story everlasting i hope for you...

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Angelica Skye 18 April 2009

wow, i dont know what else to say than i think its amazing=) 10.x

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Anjali Sinha 12 April 2009

a beautiful love story -10 anjali (do read mine THE POLITICIAN)

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Greenwolfe 1962 05 February 2009

This is another poem of overwhelming love. Meeting the challenge of separation. Wow. For some, this is not true. For this love, it is. How wonderful. Again, the power of an undiluted love. Put in writing for us to read. GW62

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Leslie Ching 30 January 2009

wonderful metaphors and word choice...ironically cliched titled (read my poem Cliched, it's a bit similar but almost the polar opposite =])

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