Monday, November 7, 2005

Absence Is Cold Comments

Rating: 5.0

waking in total darkness
I lay here
trying to think of what awakened me
it had been something?
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Eila Mahima Jaipaul
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Kanchan Bhattacharya 08 January 2009

I love the lyrical tone of your poems- a rippling brook! This poem is short, and yet expresses the cold being lonely, the feeling for the absent lover!

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Simon Whild 15 November 2005

A lovely poem, Eila.

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Charles Chaim Wax 07 November 2005

a lovely poem expressing the nature of inner need so well the darkness the dream the hope of nearness

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