Wednesday, June 29, 2011

Absence Comments

Rating: 5.0

Enveloped with their absence
gripping the slippery hands strongly,
they walk to mountain
wind breezes past insanely.
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subodh pandey
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Angie Bb Bebe 01 June 2012

Am feelin it! :) So much so, that i hav emailed it 2 a ruff-cut diamondesque friend a mine ;)

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Angie Bb Bebe 01 June 2012

im feelin it! ;) luv 2 dedicate 2 a joyfriend of mine, he'z a diamond in the ruff, sorta coalesce himself! :) ~ tho i wld opt 2 uze this spelling; 'coalesque, if indicating az coal... but iz all good in the floetry hood! Angie 6/1

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Johnathan Juarez 28 May 2012

your writing is mysterious to me. i wonder how u are experiencing your poems. they seem a little idiosyncratic. but it allows me to read further. thanks for sharing

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Lucy Lae 02 May 2012

such simple words the way you use them to make such simply beautiful stories: ]

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Rick Adriolo 26 January 2012

very lovely poem.. nice written!

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Sajna Kailas 08 December 2011

wow, nice it is, deep writing. good work loved it. soulful way of writing! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Simran Arora 24 September 2011

Hi! Simran arora here.dear hands of 2 your thinking strenth.i read 'absence'written by u.and i think i nead to learn from u so also comment on my poems and help me out, buy....keep writting.

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Farah Ilyas 11 July 2011

great combinition of words & expression...carry on

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