Enveloped with their absence
gripping the slippery hands strongly,
they walk to mountain
wind breezes past insanely.
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im feelin it! ;) luv 2 dedicate 2 a joyfriend of mine, he'z a diamond in the ruff, sorta coalesce himself! :) ~ tho i wld opt 2 uze this spelling; 'coalesque, if indicating az coal... but iz all good in the floetry hood! Angie 6/1
your writing is mysterious to me. i wonder how u are experiencing your poems. they seem a little idiosyncratic. but it allows me to read further. thanks for sharing
such simple words the way you use them to make such simply beautiful stories: ]
wow, nice it is, deep writing. good work loved it. soulful way of writing! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Hi! Simran arora here.dear hands of 2 your thinking strenth.i read 'absence'written by u.and i think i nead to learn from u so also comment on my poems and help me out, buy....keep writting.
Am feelin it! :) So much so, that i hav emailed it 2 a ruff-cut diamondesque friend a mine ;)