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Inwill gve you a rose.

A great love poem that is realistic too.

Wow! How sweet is a Rose is love....

Their yearning for love is so deep that if one gives sweeness the other will offer a rose.

Thoroughly a yearning for love poem- 10

SPANISH TEXT: ''Ausencia'' Apenas te he dejado, vas en mi, cristalina o temblorosa, o inquieta, herida por mi mismo o colmada de amor, como cuando tus ojos se cierran sobre el don de la vida que sin cesar te entrego. Amor mio, nos hemos encontrado sedientos y nos hemos bebido toda el agua y la sangre, nos encontramos con hambre y nos mordimos como el fuego muerde, dejandonos heridos. Pero esperame guardame tu dulzura. Yo te dare tambien una rosa.

Absolutely beautiful and raw

I find the closing lines of this poem to be so wonderful!

Awesome I like this poem, check mine out 

This brings to mind the image of love as war. The carnage left behind after two people have had their way with each other's hearts. It ends beautifully though, with the thought that maybe that one person is worth the fight.

We have found each other Thirsty and we have Drunk up all the water and the Blood; this is my favourite

Wait for me, my love take me in your minds heart take me in your mouth, kiss me when our existences are too far apart keep me in your dream hold me when fears hold on instead of your arms...

But wait for me, Keep for me your sweetness. I will give you too A rose. The most romantic lines I've read so far, simple, close, personal n touchy. I like his language style, they offer the connection a lot of poets lack.

It's as if, they both know they have flaws and mistakes. But the poet all asks is for a little faith in their love, that they don't give up or give in... because in the end, all will end well.

I'm interested to know as what inspired him to write this one.