Just as when looking into the sun
I am dazzled by pure light,
which is invisible,
and I only see what is lit
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‘…Absence is the greatest presence thro’ ‘memory molecules’..’ Nice anticlimaxes Sir.. Ten ++ niv
Absence, as viewed from the remarkable angle of an accomplished poet's eye. The closing three lines are simply stunning. S :)
Light invisible... but dazzling... Silence... pounding.... She... remembered... I would have never put these thoughts together. It's really stunning. Mike
your presence and absence are one and the same, incomprehensible, immeasurable...somehow this poem reminded me of my favorite song.. 'how deep is the ocean (how high is the sky) '
Man, this poem rocks.. itx really touching... i love it =] love, Emo
These lines are lovely! Very strong and meaningful, and yet also very tender.10+ from me, Paul!