Tuesday, March 27, 2007

Absence.. Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the middle of the night
When you weep, do you wish
That I were there beside you?
To soothe your tides and wipe
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Michelle Tiddy
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David Harris 04 April 2007

Michelle, this is as beautiful as it is sad. The call for love to someone who it would seem does not hear. The rhythm and the rhyme just carried me gently along as I read. A wonderful poem that deserves more than the 10 I could give it. Thanks for sharing it my friend, David.

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Michelle Tiddy

Michelle Tiddy

Staffordshire, England
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