Absence Comments

Yuri-another great image at the end. Are you sure you're not Emily Dickenson. I'm going overboard, but that's what I always wish for when I awaken in the morning. Your new fan, John

Sensetive poem expressing love (?) in the form of grief.

Heart when settled in one's hand, hurt blooms when bidding good byes... Home is not a home when there's no love in the room cate

Am I correct in my interpretation that the hurt is really for his return? Are you trying to avoid everything he usually complains about? Anyway I like - Thanks!

Soos gewoonlik, breek jy my hart...dit is waar...die pyn van totsiens lê nie in die wegstap nie, maar in die afwagting tot die wedersiens. In die verlange. In die wete dat die ure na more in hulle eie tyd verby gaan en daar is niks wat jy daar aan kan doen nie...baie nice.

Painful narration.........heart lies where home is.or home is where heart is. pain, love and seperation all put together in imaginative poem to touch all the lovers hearts.well written

And there is love...did you and I connect today on some psychic level...this poem perfectly justifies...the agony and ecstasy...beautiful...Coach

nice piece............................