Wednesday, September 6, 2006

Absence Comments

Rating: 5.0

absence is a strong sensation.
sometimes much stronger than the touch,
that having woken passions conscience
passes,
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Joseph Daly 06 September 2006

This has a good pulse to it. I like the occassional rhyme, it adds to the flow without thrwing it off-kilter. The narrative is, not suprising, very well written full of imagery.

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