Thursday, June 29, 2006

Absence Comments

Rating: 5.0

these pale cold days
away from comfort’s arms
leaves these wild eyes yearning
beneath melancholy’s brows
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Padmore Enyonam Agbemabiese
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Ivan Donn Carswell 28 May 2007

I wonder whether 'waif-like' rather than 'like waif' would complement the opening line second stanza - anyway, regardless of which, this is still a fabulous poem! Rgds, Ivan

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Padmore Enyonam Agbemabiese

Padmore Enyonam Agbemabiese

Abor, Volta Region, Ghana
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