Absence Comments

Yes, we feel the absence of an innocent poetess... beautiful expression. I liked this poem. Top score.

And thus you can make this earth a paradise by doing sweet things And that is love from your heart Which will be realised Atleast in your absence.........so touching and true. A beautiful poem shared amazingly.10

Very true said, your absence should also be felt, thereby doing sweet things. Thought provoking write. Loved it.

Everything we do in life will be highlighted in our absence both good and bad.10

A piece of work emanated from the recess of heart of the poetess! Thanks for sharing!

Great poem about feelings.

Rini, your poem makes sense of faliure.++10