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I climb up the ladder
leaning against the yellow tree in me.
I see people are enjoying theater in my world
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Beautiful poem Jahir Thank you for sharing Mario Odekerken
Mario, thank you so much for dropping a little dew on my poem. I have read some your poems. Those are interesting too. I hope we will exchange our views. Take care.
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7/23/2025 11:15:11 AM # 1.0.0
The second stanza can stand quite alone (as it does on your poet's page as a quote) . So the puzzle remains, why climb a ladder that leans against the yellow tree within the self? To reach a higher self seems possible. For perspective. Beckett might approve these ideas. Then, the yellow tree? I'm stumped (no pun intended) . Random absurdity? That sign that Godot as arrived. Perplexing.
Lantz Pierre, thank you so much for your valuable comments!