Friday, February 3, 2006

'Abrupt Shoulder Edge' Comments

Rating: 5.0

I’ve become allergic to breathing,
sucking air through the lump in my throat
to the mass of cancer that keeps beating.
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Amberlee Carter
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Uriah Hamilton 03 February 2006

I fear this allergy myself! ! Once again, you capture inner sadness with sensitive depth.

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Jackson Riley 03 February 2006

I like this a lot. especially the last few lines.

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Shelley B. Keats 03 February 2006

Nice to see you writing Amberlee.

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