Thursday, February 5, 2009

Abracadabra Comments

Rating: 5.0

Abracadabra, all I need is my magic wand
To take me away from chaos and danger
So that I will no longer need to wander
In search of a new home and a new wife
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Sandra Martyres
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Robert E Hann 27 September 2009

My kingdom for a magic wand, No more to be a vagabond. I'd conjour up a cottage where I'd watch the time go by. You'd never hear complaints from me. I'd be as happy as can be, cuz I'd be rich with all the things that money just can't buy.

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Patti Masterman 18 August 2009

I love the sarcasm here (or it is irony..for me the difference is always hard to tell) . I think they would prefer just giving us all blindfolds- probably much cheaper than magic wands..(smile)

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Ted M 13 August 2009

Loved this one. Has got all the ingredients, the current mess, and liked the way you ended it. This is smart writing, interesting and entertaining. thank you......10+++

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Eyan Desir 17 April 2009

I liked this poem good work

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Andrew Blakemore 26 March 2009

This is great Sandra, it would by nice to be able to wave a magic wand to sweep away all of our problems and worries. Excellent write. Best wishes, Andrew

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hope i too have a magical wand of that start..troubles told with humour

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Indira Renganathan 12 March 2009

Abracadabra....with a touch of humour...excellent

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Eyan Desir 26 February 2009

11+ wow i was touch beautiful perfect tht all i can say

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Scott Austin 12 February 2009

Really enjoyed this read, thank you for sharing it with us. Scott

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