Above The Love Comments

Beautifully inspiring work: -)

visiting ur pages after long, i'm charged with this powerful imagery... 'hungry fishes of thoughts...' ah!

well written. good imagery. try reading my love poems.

This is absolutely gorgeous- the mark of a great poem is one that can be translated and yet still hold its melodious meaning. Love this Onelia.x

ONElia, Long time I had not come ot your page. Very interesting poem, superb images for a very sensual topic. The position of the words make the interpretation at second reading very interesting :) I think you master metaphors so well. Fantastic.

Onelia, j'adore cette poeme! ! ! Tres magnifique! ! ! HG: -) xx

Wow, what of an interesting comment thank you! ! A poem like a scorpioo :)) its true!

this poem also stings like a scorpian the last line of the poem, as usual is the icing on cake looks a very symbolical with powerful imagery....