Above The Lonely Market Dawn Comments

An excellent poem. I give it a 10. Ron

Aim became clear..That quiet..personal feeling, , I hope that the path brings you extra light next time Love duncan X

I am very glad I followed the link to your other poems now.

This poem is precision and it is the penmanship of a village town crier. You draw me to a place of isolation before the vibrancy of market place business...10 for the above

What a fine piece of writing, the wording, the tone and each element combine to reinforce the lonely aspect of both the market, and the mood of the writer. Thank you very much

A splendid poem Andrew always a joy to read your work, thank you! ! ! *10*! ! ! Friend Thad