Tuesday, April 8, 2008

Above The Endless Skies Comments

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Far above the endless skies,
A mass of lights await our eyes.

In history they told the tales
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Rupert Park
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Asif Andalib 31 October 2008

Nicely penned thoughts. Keep it up.

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Lauren Watkins 09 May 2008

this is really good, I love the line 'confined to infinity'. keep it up!

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Susan Bagley 08 April 2008

Ty, I like this poem! Thank you for your generous comments about my 'Moon Pirates'. If you read more of my poetry you will come across some that say 'written at thirteen or written at 16'. Keep up the good work and do not let it lapse as I did. If I had been writing regularly all of my life I would have hundreds of poems. Here's to a promising future for you! ! ! ! Susan Bagley

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