Above The Clouds Comments

Love and they run parallel and body demands something whereas the soul wants something else. Great write MAN.

Lovely poem, ...10 Your eyes are pools of darkness Where my heart flows aimlessly Bruising the sides of twilights Between the dawn and the dusk The razor of your looks kills it

Lovely poem, Your eyes are pools of darkness Where my heart flows aimlessly Bruising the sides of twilights Between the dawn and the dusk The razor of your looks kills it

I have been a big fan of Akhtar Jawad for a long time because of his ability to write about love with depth. This poem is simply wonderful, my friend. You have achieved another level!

One of the most romantic, passional, intense, with genuine emotion...if Poetry is Love, and Love is Poetry...this poem confirms it! A sublime poem!