Wednesday, October 14, 2009

Above The Chasm (C) 10-14-09 Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dark days when you lose a member of your family
United we should stand but we keep perishin from self
It's a sickening crime of murder and I don't wish it on anyone
But why is it that we can't murder somebody else
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Zahir Kijani
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Kortnie Smith 28 April 2010

This is a great very deep poem and I love it

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Eyan Desir 28 October 2009

Interesting fine poem

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Wow, I like this one a lot!

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Aditya Mudbhary 23 October 2009

Great poem u got me into it frm the first line and another thing i loved about it is that with words you have carved yr feelings into this poem which is very tough to do and one can only do this by feeling the emotion so i give u a big 10 for this loved it...But can i just ask u a question... What place in the world r u talkin about? ? im really curious

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Kuji Soliman 15 October 2009

LOVELY! ! i loved this one so much! !

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Zahir Kijani

Zahir Kijani

Buffalo, New york
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