Wednesday, July 1, 2009

Above The Atmosphere Comments

Rating: 4.9

If I could climb a ladder to the stars.
Forget my fear of heights and upward glance.
To see the heavens twinkling down on me,
Making me feel that I could freely dance.
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Ernestine Northover
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Ivor Hogg 31 October 2009

If only Ernestine Im sure you would

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Indira Renganathan 04 October 2009

Highly idealized thought of words...superb

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Chuck Audette 22 July 2009

A perfect poem on this 40th anniversary of the moon landing! -chuck

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Meggie Gultiano 15 July 2009

Your words are full of hope and peace. If only i can hug you for real..you will see my eyes streaming with tears and the heart beat that says..ah..here is my real friend forever. If i can talk to Jesus, i will say beautiful things about you. Love you so much, my dearest friend, Meggie

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Lynda Robson 07 July 2009

Beautiful imagery and a dreamlike quality to this lovely write, well composed Ernestine, 10 Lynda xx

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wonderful rhyme, rhythm and imagery. To dance, to give hope and feel love are fine ingredients for a worthy poem such a this. Just beautiful. 10 Karin Anderson

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Stephen Stirk 03 July 2009

A beautiful creation of fine imagery and clarity of imagination. I really enjoyed this mystical and dream like journey of hope A Lovely poem. Best Steve

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Andrew Blakemore 02 July 2009

A poem full of hope and promise, wonderful write Ernestine. Love, Andy xx

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Scarlett Treat 02 July 2009

Not to mention that view from the top when you arrive! Beautiful work!

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Fiona Davidson 01 July 2009

Beautiful images make this a wonderful read Ernestine...Fi 10++++

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Ann Beard 01 July 2009

Lovely Ernestine.Kind regards Ann

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Ency Bearis 01 July 2009

Splendid poem...a nice wisdom for the peace and love for the world...nice to read.....10

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