Above From The Deep Comments

A wonderful poem shared. Thank you.

One sweet day i smell something sweet From a garden of my soul The growing plant i seed once with tears and hardness i witnessed Harvest from sweet sacrifice Turn for joy and happiness For reality now in same line Side by side walk with me Above from this deep Sweat and tears dropp to my feet I smell the existence of my ripen dream fruit... great theme. Effort doesn't go in vain. If we seed seeds properly with care it must gives us results. Dream for future is best but dream without try and care is fruitless. Dear madam, this poem is a best inspiration not only to your that particular friend but also to all friends.

From the deep. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Really great poem, one of your best. So much imagery and lots to ponder and think about.

Above from the deep Fertilizing with trial and error Usual watering without surrender Above from the deep Raising hand from below The green hopes finally crawling out In ambient of different calling to wake up Above from the deep The sun still waiting for this new born Touch them up to reach higher as they can go- - - a beautiful poem written for your friend asking your friend to be determined to achieve the goal come what may with so many examples and a wonderful way of introducing your theme...... let this poem give life to so many.. thank you dear poetess. tony

Beautiful words. I like it.

Arise from the deep where there is nothing but darkness. No light can penetrate its gloom. Rise to the top and sow the seeds that will draw from the light its life giving power. Just like a dream thats been planted in the mind will take sometime to grow and be fruitful when it takes root. So poignantly written. Reaches to the depth of the Soul.

A poem that blesses; work to be proud of!

Very powerful and vivid imagery! Your friend is lucky to have you!

I loved this. Your writing is so calming. Thank you for sharing this.

Your writing is so calming. Thank you for sharing this.

Above from the deep Fertilizing with trial and error Usual watering without surrender Above from the deep Raising hand from below The green hopes finally crawling out In ambient of different calling to wake up Above from the deep The sun still waiting for this new born Touch them up to reach higher as they can go Higher and taller above Above from this deep that line is so sad

this friend of your is fortunate to have you you put your soul in it

holy God! who do you write it for? i love the paradox.. i love the smile in your poem... i can feel the happiness... such a lovely poem full of nice aspects.... fantastic my friend

I was reminded of red indians in some parts of this piece.Thanks.

This poem is really a gem.....every piece of ideas expressed, and metaphors used is precise yet powerful..........

Very aluring poem. Powerfull and strikes you with every line...

Ohooo Great poem...nice metaphor...specially this ~ '...We shall pluck the sun/Embracing all shines in our arm...' a feeling what poet like you can do...enjoyed much tenner ~ Regards ~ niv ====== Thanks for comment on my poem Invite to read and comment on my poem [read as a protest] ‘Ogling Orgy’ or any … Thanks …..Sorry for belated comment

Powerful, uplifting and enlightening poem. We all need to rise above the deep. In the event my ship is ever sunk, I hope I have this poem with me. Great piece of writing.

a great n enjoyable read with greater insights...definitely from the deep!