Saturday, April 23, 2016

Above Despair Comments

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I wish to die in day old love
like leaving work on a good Friday,
in a good week, in a good year.
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Barry Middleton
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Dimitrios Galanis 26 April 2016

I want to die painting hope on a rare old rainy day when light is all within. I pray that gods, or law of odds will choose a time above despair, for no dread scythe must find me there. =great verses, barry.

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Barry Middleton 26 April 2016

Thanks...................................................!

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Nosheen Irfan 25 April 2016

A beautiful poem on the theme of death. How you have conceived it is simply awesome. Imagery adds to the beauty of the poem.

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Barry Middleton 25 April 2016

Thank you Nosheen. Glad you liked it.

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Norah Tunney 23 April 2016

Deeply touching and well crafted poem Great images, a deeply satisfying read Thanks Barry

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Barry Middleton 23 April 2016

Thanks Norah. This is another very old one.

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