Saturday, January 14, 2006

Above All Things Desirable Comments

Rating: 4.9

A little man in his late seventies
trudged along
in front of the Hebrew Home For the Aged in Coney Island
grey skull, faded skin,
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Charles Chaim Wax
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kskdnj sajn 14 January 2006

Enjoyed this much. Happiness is simple, but not so simple to appreciate the smallest of gifts that happiness generously bestows among people. It seems that it truly takes a great amount of pain and growth to learn...and leaves you wondering why you never looked out of the corner of your eye before. Thanks for sharing Charles.

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Martin A. Ramos 14 January 2006

Excelent. Not only free verse but also a story. This flow so well, I wonder, how much rewriting do you do? Martin

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Hugh Cobb 14 January 2006

A lovely poem, Charles. Humanity is at the core of all your work and love is at the core of all humanity It is the connecting tissue of our lives. A beautiful poem. Heartfelt. Hugh

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***** ********* 14 January 2006

I want one of those angels, but in male form! lol Great uplifting work Charles. 10 from Tai, fallen angel, with very dirty feet!

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