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let s this words above all. :)

The lines you used are very good. I want to read this over and over again. Very Good!

Simple but profound. Keep Writing.

You have to slip Before you fall You have to stand Before you’re tall great lines. I like this one a lot. great job. Becca

For a boy of your age this poem sounds highly matured voices; total surrender to God; it is not easy to achieve.......kudos. Great poem

Very nice thoughts and connections.

yeah that one line saying that you have to slip before you fall is very good. i love this one nice job!

I like how it was expressed. Alot of lessons written. I like the part that says 'You have to slip Before you fall' It is sooo true, I take that as, do not assume anything'

pretty good poem and expresses pretty good

I like standing tall...