Thursday, November 27, 2008

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Rating: 4.3

Although you cradle gently,
wanting you has altered me
like a leaf, falling from it's branch
upon a solid oak tree.
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Viola Grey
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*Trusting You* 27 December 2008

and I clap this is Magnificent... I love it! ! ! greatness I sware. yes great job! ! ! I loved it! ! ! Becca

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Ridge Cahill 08 December 2008

An excellent poem, Viola. A woman forever changed by love - delivered with great imagery and emotion. You chose the perfect words in each stanza.

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totally disturbed 29 November 2008

I love this it is full of emotion great words.. Wendy

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Tom Balch 28 November 2008

Fantastic piece, ' back for more of the same ' 10+ Tom

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Lynda Robson 28 November 2008

This is so beautiful, written with a gentleness, fragile somehow, 10 Lynda xx

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Kris Smith 28 November 2008

You have a style all of your own and never fail to draw the reader in Viola 10 ++++ Chris

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very nicely written... I love the images in this poem... Krista

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Kesav Easwaran 27 November 2008

a leaf falling...but not on the earth yet...still floating...to regain the solid and loving branch it left...well written...softly romantic...10

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