Although you cradle gently,
wanting you has altered me
like a leaf, falling from it's branch
upon a solid oak tree.
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An excellent poem, Viola. A woman forever changed by love - delivered with great imagery and emotion. You chose the perfect words in each stanza.
This is so beautiful, written with a gentleness, fragile somehow, 10 Lynda xx
You have a style all of your own and never fail to draw the reader in Viola 10 ++++ Chris
very nicely written... I love the images in this poem... Krista
a leaf falling...but not on the earth yet...still floating...to regain the solid and loving branch it left...well written...softly romantic...10
and I clap this is Magnificent... I love it! ! ! greatness I sware. yes great job! ! ! I loved it! ! ! Becca