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Not only am i loving this poem but its hard to stop reading this. this is very well writtin. i can feel your poetic thought flowing through this piece. I LOVE IT! ! ! 10! Keep up the awesome writing. ^^

Good writing Prakash...Elegant thought! I enjoyed it...Keep it up

Who is this 'that’s you the melodious'? Too mystic a poem hard to comprehend what is narrated about what. Please be with the theme.[ And delet this comment after reading] Good writing..Beautiful composition but still a bit hard to follow the thread.

This is very nice, i wish I could write like this. What inspired you to make it?

Very touching, it takes courage to discuss what is lock up in one's soul.I am happy you did share.

this is lovely! ! i love it really!

A wonderful piece of work and welcome to poemhunter.

I also share the views of Rajaram Ramachandran. Let me share my views regarding your views. Let us not think too much about the reactions of the world to our honesty and sincerity. We can't practically correct the world for its whims and fancies. What we can do is to remain very honest and straightforward to the true nature of our heart. It will certainly pay off in the long run. Don't we expect these qualities from the world around us? The world also expects it from us. First, let us show it. The world around us will certainly receprocate. The world hasn't gone that cruel. I am sure.

The poem is thought provoking, well rhyming and well composed.

P.M. It does not have to always be dark out even at night. If destiny is what seperates us from the truth then I will fate my destiny to put it together

It was a very goood piece i enjoyed reading and your choice of words couldn't have been more perfect. =]

%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%% But pity the gap is same, God knows, I put my best. Or perhaps, my true tenderness is uneasy to digest. None can hang in forever, me too human or so ain’t, Maybe, an easygoing person, but of course, no saint. %%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%% I am a fan of Shakespeares Sonnets, have u ever read them. A compliment indeed Kashie xoxo

Honest and full of feelings. A good look at things and nice choice of words to describe what you want to convey. I like how your combination of lines form together to create this piece. Debbie

very flowy-good use and mixing of words-very nicely organized thoughts with emotions interlocked :) like it

I like this one..it flows easily, I especially like the last verse...10

An enjoyable poem to read. Beautiful choice of words and images well described. Contains worthwhile thoughts to ponder. Keep on writing.

Welcome to the PH family...i like this poem...pleasing end rhymes. Keep it up, Thanks for reading 'Feet'

nice work mehra keep it up

yo very nice. keep goin

With this your first poem, you have proven to me and the entire world that you plenty of feelings and talent, so keep it going, you have a long way to go, Love and Peace and don't worry 'WHEN LOVE IS GONE' another one is in its way...