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awww...its such a cute and lovely poem....

Now thats my kinda POEM! well done! Roger.

sense of longing in your poem makes one to rush to the next line. i love it.

adorable poem! So nicely written.

aww...there's a sweetness in this piece that wraps the reader up...as if they were in their lover's arms. An innocent forgiveness... A true enjoyment to read.: o) Bj