Fog is too thick I can hardly see
Follow the big truck along the way
Like a lifetime you can't foresee
Sooner I'll be where I should be
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I like your rhyming and metering. I admire your keen observation of what is around.
the nicest poem i ever read; well rythming and well flow,10 marks. thank you for your comment on mine live-in relationship
Nice rhyming great work When you get some time can you please read my poem called: A DREAM Thank you and god bless