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Fog is too thick I can hardly see
Follow the big truck along the way
Like a lifetime you can't foresee
Sooner I'll be where I should be
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Manonton Dalan
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Nice rhyming great work When you get some time can you please read my poem called: A DREAM Thank you and god bless

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Pacific Hernandez 01 November 2008

I like your rhyming and metering. A very nice poem.

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Pacific Hernandez 01 November 2008

I like your rhyming and metering. I admire your keen observation of what is around.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 25 October 2008

the nicest poem i ever read; well rythming and well flow,10 marks. thank you for your comment on mine live-in relationship

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Amanda 'blue' Leigh 24 October 2008

would make a cool rap song... *! *

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Manonton Dalan

Manonton Dalan

virginia, usa
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