Wednesday, October 11, 2017

About Me Comments

Rating: 4.9

I am a little springlet
That has fallen
Into the great ocean of poetry
And has lost its identity
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Ruta Mohapatra
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Rob Lamberton 19 January 2023

Sometimes, when the rain falls, what looked like a springlet has become a mighty flow of water!

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Bri Edwards 14 November 2022

4 stars. 'Rare jewels', yes, is what I think of the numbers of poems I find here (sometimes) , on PH, which I consider precious jewels; they ARE 'rare' aka few and far between. : ) bri

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Unnikrishnan E S 09 January 2022

Top score.

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Unnikrishnan E S 09 January 2022

Every droplet contributes to the beauty and greatness of the ocean. Of Poetry. Though, the droplet loses its identity, it is every such small droplet contributed by the smallest springlet that makes the ocean. Some too tiny, some a little bigger

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David Wood 12 December 2021

A very tender and light poem, my you shine in the ocean of poems!

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Chinedu Dike 09 September 2019

I'm inspired by your style of writing. You're very talented.

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Ruta Mohapatra 10 September 2019

Thank you, Chinedu! Happy to read your comment!

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Philo Yan 11 March 2019

It's not bad to be a springlet since each of us have to start from somewhere. :)

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Ruta Mohapatra 12 March 2019

Thank you, Philo!

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 09 October 2018

Very well said and crafted very touchingly.....Ruta.......I love reading your valuable and beautiful poems.....thanks for sharing

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Ruta Mohapatra 09 October 2018

Thank you for taking the time to read my poem and comment!

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Rebecca Navarre 30 September 2018

Ever so beautifully sung, with ever such beautiful heart! .. Beautifully moving! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. Ever so many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Ruta Mohapatra 01 October 2018

Much obliged! Thanks for reading!

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Ashika Murali Acharya 19 September 2018

Is that for all of us.: -) .. Nicely penned, simple and lyrical.

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Ruta Mohapatra 21 September 2018

Thank you! It is.

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Glen Kappy 02 September 2018

this is concise, pleasant, lyrical, and a good extended metaphor. i have yet to read something by you, ruta, that i haven't liked. -glen

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Ruta Mohapatra 21 September 2018

Thank you!

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Bri Edwards 21 August 2018

SPEAKING OF GEMS (JEWELS) , THIS IS CERTAINLY ONE OF THEM. TO MyPoemList. and speaking of identity, will you someday share a bio/an About Me with readers? ? i'll read one more of yours now. bri :)

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Laya Bajpai 08 August 2018

Very beautiful poem Ruta...there is not one line that I can pick as my favorite...the whole poem is ethereal.

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Ruta Mohapatra 21 September 2018

Thank you, Laya!

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 03 July 2018

Google is playing mischief of predicting words and modifying them even after you write one. Springlet was misspelt as Springer. Subhas

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Ruta Mohapatra 21 September 2018

Thank you, Mr. Chakra!

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 03 July 2018

Not only springers, but also large rivers and seas lose their identity in the ocean. You are a sea of wisdom and a large river of creativity. You would build a world of your own, one day. Thanks for the beautiful lovely poem.10+++++++++++

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Robert Murray Smith 21 May 2018

A lovely write of delight.+++10 Robert

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Chris Embrick 10 January 2018

A beautiful gem. It takes each little stream to make a river. Thanks poetess.

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Ruta Mohapatra 21 September 2018

Thank you, Chris!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 January 2018

Still, I enjoy Flowing with my fellow poets Wondering at the rare jewels That light up the dark ocean floor -A fabulous poem is shared..............10

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Ruta Mohapatra 21 September 2018

Thank you, Mr.Dillip!

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Sakalabaktula Sairaj 09 November 2017

so nice poem dear write some more good poem.. keep it up all the best

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Bharati Nayak 17 October 2017

I am a little springlet That has fallen Into the great ocean of poetry And has lost its identity - - - - - A great write, thanks for sharing.

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Ruta Mohapatra 21 September 2018

Thank you, Bharati!

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