I am a little springlet
That has fallen
Into the great ocean of poetry
And has lost its identity
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4 stars. 'Rare jewels', yes, is what I think of the numbers of poems I find here (sometimes) , on PH, which I consider precious jewels; they ARE 'rare' aka few and far between. : ) bri
Every droplet contributes to the beauty and greatness of the ocean. Of Poetry. Though, the droplet loses its identity, it is every such small droplet contributed by the smallest springlet that makes the ocean. Some too tiny, some a little bigger
A very tender and light poem, my you shine in the ocean of poems!
I'm inspired by your style of writing. You're very talented.
It's not bad to be a springlet since each of us have to start from somewhere. :)
Very well said and crafted very touchingly.....Ruta.......I love reading your valuable and beautiful poems.....thanks for sharing
Ever so beautifully sung, with ever such beautiful heart! .. Beautifully moving! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. Ever so many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++
Is that for all of us.: -) .. Nicely penned, simple and lyrical.
this is concise, pleasant, lyrical, and a good extended metaphor. i have yet to read something by you, ruta, that i haven't liked. -glen
SPEAKING OF GEMS (JEWELS) , THIS IS CERTAINLY ONE OF THEM. TO MyPoemList. and speaking of identity, will you someday share a bio/an About Me with readers? ? i'll read one more of yours now. bri :)
Very beautiful poem Ruta...there is not one line that I can pick as my favorite...the whole poem is ethereal.
Google is playing mischief of predicting words and modifying them even after you write one. Springlet was misspelt as Springer. Subhas
Not only springers, but also large rivers and seas lose their identity in the ocean. You are a sea of wisdom and a large river of creativity. You would build a world of your own, one day. Thanks for the beautiful lovely poem.10+++++++++++
A beautiful gem. It takes each little stream to make a river. Thanks poetess.
Still, I enjoy Flowing with my fellow poets Wondering at the rare jewels That light up the dark ocean floor -A fabulous poem is shared..............10
so nice poem dear write some more good poem.. keep it up all the best
I am a little springlet That has fallen Into the great ocean of poetry And has lost its identity - - - - - A great write, thanks for sharing.
Sometimes, when the rain falls, what looked like a springlet has become a mighty flow of water!