As she enters the room in her slinky black dress,
You admire her graceful walk, she’s dressed for success
The smoky air slowly fills with her sweet perfume,
She tips her glasses just enough to scan the room
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wow, that was well said, you told a great tale, with a very sad ending, wow, just thinking about what she went thru, hurts me...
This is an incredible piece...one that I only hope didn't end the way it was written.
1st of All I am loving your poetry its teaching me the sound matching. Loved this one too as for behind what everyone can see there is always a history, nothing is Perfect, sad this tale, ending with a twist. Better when things can be changed or stopped, but, life is not always a fairly tale. Great writing. Thanks!