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unpolished Beverly Vanderberg6 minutes ago I picked up some good images, tho fleeting, but was distressed by my own confusion...the first four lines seem random and ill-placed....are contrary or are they contrast...sorry, you lost me. But third and fourth made more sense and even pulled me in. I'd work on this, if it was mine....there is heart in it, that might respond to a little massage! I also wonder if there wasn't a little shyness with the subject matter...that, too would polish up nicely, in my humble opinion.

good Sai Krishna4 minutes ago nice

I wished it to long more As I was about to snore On her vast empire With magic spell to whisper