I look around for strictly scientific reasons,
to ascertain just what it is that makes the diff.
I spend considerable time here on the beach in all four seasons,
and while observing all and finally asking if
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I thought it was clever and silly. The rhyming scheme didn't get to me too much, I was able to keep up. the only thing that really stuck out to me, was when you used all caps to spell out 'nipple' and 'dipple' For some reason, perhaps just personal preference, I find it annoying. Overall though, I got a giggle out of the piece and I must say, you are quite creative. Always, amberlee
Cute Herbert really cute. Fun read!