About Dipples Comments

Cute Herbert really cute. Fun read!

Quite enjoyable, silly even, yet with a touch of class too.

I thought it was clever and silly. The rhyming scheme didn't get to me too much, I was able to keep up. the only thing that really stuck out to me, was when you used all caps to spell out 'nipple' and 'dipple' For some reason, perhaps just personal preference, I find it annoying. Overall though, I got a giggle out of the piece and I must say, you are quite creative. Always, amberlee