Saturday, February 25, 2012

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I hate you dad..
For what you did to me as a child..
A harmless thing that you could beat..
I dont understand why you denide me at a very yough age
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Christine Blaydes 14 March 2012

I love it, it's okay my dad was never there either, but you don't need a father as long as you can hold your head up.=)

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Madan M 29 February 2012

wish to kiss the ision of love

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Natasha Smith 27 February 2012

Thz its very true though

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Saadat Tahir 27 February 2012

it is painful as it is spontaneous. it gouges out a gash in ones tender side.... a child absolutely deserves to be loved...has the divine right to be cared for and feel wanted and looked after....you have written one poem and its a bang.... very touching lines keep going mate.... sat

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